In the past
I traveled into me along path ways of injurywithin promisesbroken like a nose in darkness nightmare clowns riderusty green wagonsshame is rain andI am soaking wetrocks dusty with foot stepsglare at...
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shame is rain andI am soaking wetthat was my favorite line in the whole piece...i liked this a lot...it's been a while since i've read anything by you...i've missed your words...thanks for a good...
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I liked the same line. The torment is so magnified."shame is rain andI am soaking wet" Suzanne
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wow, david..... this is a pain filled piece of writing. So many lines that i could say were a favorite:=====================shame is rain and I am soaking wet=====================bridges gap dreams...
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david this was an amazing piece! i especially loved the ending"take me away from hereto peacetake me away from here in piecesBlue me and I don't know whowe are anymore and living in-"well done, and...
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